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Friday, 3 June 2011

At the weekend, part 2


At the weekend I went to Chipmunks. In the car, on the way to Chipmunks, I was tired. But when we got there I was excited. I went through the Chipmunks door. I saw a big bouncy slide and a lost park. I also saw a big ladder and a Merry-go-around. It was going around. I wanted to go on it. I got on the Pink Horse. It was cool. I was thirsty so my cousin gave me water to drink. Later my Dad picked me up. I had fun at Chipmunks.
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  1. AGNES3 June 2011 at 19:12

    I like your story.KIESHA!

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  2. sophie6 June 2011 at 14:21

    cool and good wirting

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  3. catherine9 June 2011 at 18:17

    very cool writing i loved chipmunks it was my fav place 2 go when i was round about 6 or 7
    great story loved the words you used

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  4. Anonymous12 June 2011 at 15:23

    Chipmunks is still a great plaace to visit. When my children were your age they loved going there. Keep up the good writing Kiesha
    From
    Mrs Manickum

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