Once there were two children. They were both boys. Their names were Baden and P.J. They went camping in the forest. They took a flashlight, a tent and some food with
them.
After they had put up their tent they made a fire to keep
warm and to cook their food. They cooked
their marshmallows over the fire. The
marshmallows tasted good.
As they ate their marshmallows some zombies jumped out
from the bushes. The children screamed
loudly. The zombies walked quickly to
the children and tried to bite them. The
children quickly ran home and told their dad about the zombies. They said, “There are zombies in the forest
and they tried to bit us”. Dad was
horrified to hear this and so he called the FBI to tell them about the
zombies. The FBI said that they would
take of the zombies.
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