On
the weekend I went to the park. I went
with my uncle. Soane, Launoa, Taniela
and Folau came with us. At the park we
played on the swings. I went high on the
swing. When I was swinging on the swing
my tummy felt ticklish. I also went on
the slide and then I had a drink of water.
I felt thirsty. I liked going to
the park because I had fun.
Hi Akesa you did a good job but read your story and be careful about your spelling.
ReplyDeleteHi Akesa I like your story it looks like you had fun at the park with your family and I am one of them.
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