Once there were two children. They were both boys. Their names were C.J. and William. One day they rode their bikes in the
forest. It was a hot sunny day. They stopped to have a drink from their drink
bottles because they were thirsty.
There was a snake in the bushes but they didn’t see
it. The snake slid over to the
bikes. Next the boys looked at the bike
wheels. They saw the snake. They yelled to the snake, “Get away, get away”.
Then the boys got off their bikes and quickly ran all the
way home. When they got home the boys told
their mums about the snake. Their mums
called the police and told them about the snake in the forest. The police told the mums not to worry because
they would find the snake.
An exciting piece of writing Emmanuel. Your words create a picture for me to see.
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