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Tuesday 19 November 2013

The Forest



Once there were two girls.  Their names were Charlse and Sam.  One day they were looking for a spot to camp in the forest.  They had a tent, some food and water.  They found a good spot to put up their tent.  It was under a tree.  Then they worked together to put their tent up. 

After they had eaten they went to sleep inside their tent.  But in the middle of the night a loud storm woke them up.  They heard thunder and they saw lightening in the sky.  There was a lot of heavy rain coming down on their tent.  They were very scared!  It was a very bad storm.

They said, “Let’s get out of here”.  The river had risen with all the heavy rain, so the girls had to swim to safety.  When they got back on land they walked to a hall where there were a lot of other people taking shelter from the storm.

Later their mum and dad came to get them.  They decided to always check the weather forecast before camping in the forest again.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Sydney-Rayne, you have a nice story and I like all your paragraphs and sentences because they are logically sequenced.

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  2. Wow!
    This is an amazing story. I liked how you used who, what, where and when. Keep up the good work:)

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