In
the holidays I went to the Easter show.
I went with my family. My
favourite thing was riding on the racing cars.
I rode in the racing car with my aunty.
I liked it because when we crashed we got an Easter Egg and a
surprise. My surprise was a Barbie
doll. I like my Barbie doll. I am grateful and I had a fun day.
Wow! Having so much fun and winning a prize, you were very lucky. I like the way you have included so much detail in your writing.
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